יום רביעי, 18 בספטמבר 2013

All the years of her life – post reading - correction

All the years of her life – post reading

There are some themes during the story(phr.). One of them is to be caught red-handed. When I was 5 years (old) I have done(gr.) something wrong, I have(מיותר) stole. This is something I remember until today and I will remember it for the rest of my life. I do regret it but I am also happy that (it) happened because from that day I have learned an important lesson.

When I was young, my mother asked me to buy milk from the grocery. She gave me 7 shekels, the exact money for paying the milk(phr.). When I got there I went to the refrigerator to get the milk and on my way to the cash desk(ww.-register) I saw a candy that looked really good. I wanted the candy really badly but I couldn't afford it because I didn't have the money for it. The more I looked at the candy the more I wanted it. At last, unreasonably, I took the candy and put it into my pocket without the cashier's attention. I went to the cash desk(ww.) really nervous because I wasn't sure if the Cashier noticed. I paid for the milk and went home.


When I got home I gave the milk to my mom as I was requested to, but my mother noticed that I had an extra candy in my pocket. She asked me how I got it. I admitted that I had stolen the candy. She explained to me why it was wrong stealing(gr.- to steal) because stealing is not only against the law but also it's hurting(gr.) the person I have(מיותר) stole from and I felt really guilty. She told me that we were going to get(ww.-go) back to the grocery to give it back and tell the cashier that I was sorry for stealing, and so we did.


From that day I have learned my lesson, I will never steal again.

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Daphna




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