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(If it's a diary entry, you should add a date and the words "dear diary")
(If it's a diary entry, you should add a date and the words "dear diary")
1. Today
it's finally over. The war is over. Germany has fallen down and we won. I miss
my family with my whole heart, my mother, my father and mostly my brother - Larry.
It's wired(sp.+ww.) (that) I haven't heard from him for a while, (new sentence) he usually writes to me, maybe he
couldn't because he fought in the war too(ww.), I just hope he is fine. Right now I'm on my way home to my family. I hope
the rumors aren't true that my father is guilty for killing 21 pilots because
of his business. I know my father, he couldn’t do something like that, and the business
isn’t that important to him, he wouldn’t kill my friends(ww.)! I hope it will past(ww.) fast and the court will find him not guilty as charged. In about two hours I will
get home and I'm sure that now we can all live as one big old(ww.) family.
Chris gets the letter from Ann. (New sentence) he would read(gr.) it quietly and then decide(gr.) to not(wo.) show the letter to his father because he knows how much pain it could bring him. So instead(of) letting Joe read the letter, Chris is facing(gr.) Joe and tells him everything he (has) felt inside all this time and telling(gr.) him the truth about how he feels. At the beginning of the conversation they are talking quietly but it’s(מיותר) quickly becomes an argument between them. Joe is trying to defend himself but Chris is not convinced. After a long loud argument, Joe is saying to Chris that he is tired from(ww.) this subject and from digging this up. He is apologizing(gr.) to Chris for everything he has done, including blame(ing) Ann’s father. Chris, not peace with himself(phr.), is forgiving(gr.) him and folding(gr.) the letter into his pocket. The two are exiting(gr.) and then Chris is entering(gr.) again and we can see him hiding the letter inside his journal as we know it will never be forgotten.
Not bad work.
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Daphna
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