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Dear editor of the newspaper,
You might (be) aware of the issue that women don’t really count in society and because of that unequal(ww.) phenomenon, women can't be successful just as men. For that reason, women have to make fake and other tricks(phr.) just to be (as) successful as men.
In some cases women succeed to trick the society and they manage to show the world what they are capable of (you are missing a word here) without limits from society, and when they succeed to manage their willing(phr.) it makes their days worth(while).
But in some cases they can't manage their willing(phr.-what do you mean?) and it makes their days worth (less) then(sp.) lost, mining(sp.) they didn’t accomplish anything and they couldn’t do what they wished for.
Now you need a final paragraph to conclude and make your point - what is it that you are actually trying to say here? Why did you write the letter to the editor? What was the purpose?
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Daphna
In some cases women succeed to trick the society and they manage to show the world what they are capable of (you are missing a word here) without limits from society, and when they succeed to manage their willing(phr.) it makes their days worth(while).
But in some cases they can't manage their willing(phr.-what do you mean?) and it makes their days worth (less) then(sp.) lost, mining(sp.) they didn’t accomplish anything and they couldn’t do what they wished for.
Now you need a final paragraph to conclude and make your point - what is it that you are actually trying to say here? Why did you write the letter to the editor? What was the purpose?
(70)
Daphna
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