Post reading - summer's reading

Post reading:

Dear Mr. Cattanzara,

I'm writing you this letter because I want to thank you. Since you pushed me 10 years ago to improve my education and actually read those 100 books, I have changed. After I improved my education, I found a great job and lately I promoted(gr.- use the passive) to be the vice president of the company. Moreover, I got marry to my wife which I met at the company. 

I will never be able to thank you enough for pushing me to do something useful with my old life 

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Yours,

George Stayonovich

Not bad. But too short, and again too general. Why don't you try to go deeper and be more specific describing George's life and what he went through in the past 10 years? Remember, he hasn't seen his friend in a long time and used to be close - so he probably has more to tell him.

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Daphna